In our most recent lesson we showed the class our ideas for our thriller film. We had to get up and pitch it to them telling them everything that was going to be involved and also how it was going to be classed as a thriller.
We decided that our film was going to be based around a girlfriend and boyfriend that get scared by the girlfriends new man.
The feedback which we received was that it was a good pitch but we needed to rethink things that wasn't so good.
We needed to change the title of the film because it wasn't specific to the genre that we were doing it sounded more like someone deserted on a dessert island.
Also they found we shouldn't use Sam Hadwen in the actual film as it may not fit correctly.
A good point of feedback that we got was that we had thought about how the film was going to extend and thanks to input from the class we decided to not go to far but just keep the audience on a cliffhanger.
